比如:There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on。
分析:本句后半部分"For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on。”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词語,不能独立成句。
改为:There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper。
四、悬垂修饰语
suo(所)谓悬垂修饰語是指句首的短語与后面句子的逻辑guan(关)系混亂bu(不)清。
比如:At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 這句中"at the age of ten"只寫出十岁时,dan(但)没有说明“谁”十岁时,按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我們把这个悬垂修饰语改得明确一点,读者或考guan(官)在读句子时就不会误解le(了)。
改为:When I was ten, my grandfather died。
五、词性误用
“词性误用”常表现为:介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名詞当动词用等。
比如:None can negative the importance of money。
分析:negative系形容词,误作動词。
改为:None can deny the importance of money。
六、指代不清
指代不清主要讲的是代詞與被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不一致。
比如:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid。